There are a number of ways to increase your chances of getting a good Mark for your magazine project:
Front cover
Make sure that all images are original and in focus
Make sure that you don't write over your models face
Poster style front covers are OK but difficult to get right
Nice idea to have a special subscribers version, but you also need a retail version of the front cover
Mastheads tend to be too big or look like word art
Contents Page
Editors notes work ESP. With a photo
Having details like contact numbers for marketing, PR, print etc. Looks professional
Having an advert about saving money by subscribing is excellent and in line with industry practice.
Less successful contents pages have a limited number of articles listed - look at a professional contents page - I bet that has more articles than yours!
All photos need to be captioned. You need to write a line that makes the article sound interesting. The caption must be written on the photo -not underneath where it gets lost
All photos need a page number
There must be a consistent use of colour throughout the contents page
Include a small version of your masthead on your contents page
DPS
Generally the written words (or copy) was excellent - highly appropriate for the target audience. However more care needed in arranging the text.
The page must look balanced
The columns must be the same width
Pull Quotes run across both columns and are interesting!
The pages need to be numbered
Each page needs the name of the magazine on (this can be a small version of the masthead)
You need to print off a black and White copy of your magazine and get feedback from the people in your group. You also need to compare your magazine with a professional magazine - what does the professional magazine have that yours is lacking?